Part 2

Note : Marked with red writing, writing is wrong

1. The languages of the world presents a vast array of structural similarities and differences.

Alasan : Karena languages (plural), maka pada present menjadi singular

2. The rise of multinationals have resulted in a great ideal of legal ambiguty because multinationals can operate in so many jurisdictions.

Excuse : when a prepositional phrase comes between the subject and the verb, be sure that the verb agrees with the subject

3. All of the east-west interstate highmay in the United States has even numbers, while north-south interstate highways are odd-numbered
Excuse : When an expression of quantity using of is the subject, the verb agrees with the object.


4. When a massive star in the large Magellanic Cloud exploded in 1987, a wave of neutrinos were detected on Earth.
Excuse :  Were replaced with was.

5. Every open space in the targeted area that has grass and a few bushes are occupied by the white-crowned sparrow.
Excuse : Has changed to have.

6. Krakatoa is remembered as the volcano that put so much ash into the air that sunsets arround the world was affected for two years afterward. 
Excuse : Remembered change to remember


7. The term "Yankee" was originally a nickname for people from New England, but now anyone from the United States are referred to as a Yankee.
Excuse : Are change to is 

8. A network of small arteries, mostly sandwiched between the skin and underlying muscles, supply blood to the face and scalp.
Excuse :

9. Mesquite is a small tree in the Southwest who can withstand the severest drought. 
Excuse : Who change to which.